(Solved) : Revising And Editing My Paper . . .

Question Description

i have written a research paper and i got the feedback from my professor on all the mistakes that have been found in it. what i need you to do is revise it and correct it gramarly and follow my professor notes to make it better.

if i pass this assignmet i will pass my class please becarful with it it so important.

i will attach my file.

this is the comments that i got from my professor :

1. Your topic sentence clearly states your paragraph position.

2. Your final draft is paraphrased well within APA guidelines,