(Answered):Peer Edit Drafts . . . .

Question Description

Peer edit these two drafts below. To do that, use the peer review checklist for annotated bibliographies attached below.

1st draft: The research question I’m trying to answer is “Why do people use sex in advertisements and, if it does work, how does it work psychologically?

Tylee, John. “Does Sex Still Sell in Advertising?” Campaign, 6 Aug. 2010, p. 17. ABI/INFORM Trade & Industry; ELibrary, edmonds.idm.oclc.org/login?url=https://search-proquest-com.edmonds.idm.oclc.org/docview/748827848?accountid=1626.

The author of this campaign, John Tylee, works as an Associate Editor for the company Haymarket Publishings. Haymarket is a media group that owns a lot of brands such as MPR and