(Answered):Portfolio Revision Essays 1 . . . .

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These are the instructions for the portfolio assignment, I will be attaching two essays that I feel like could be drastically improved to have a better grade. Additional sources and paragraphs would be great along with elevated diction as well. In the end, I would like both of the essays I attached to be revised. The length of the essay does not matter as long as it is drastically better.

Your final portfolio is meant to showcase you and your progress as a writer during this semester. To this end, you will compose a reflection on your experience and