(Answered):Need Edit For An Argumentative Essay . . . .

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this was the revision from my instructor for essay four draft

For revision:1. The following is unprovable, so you wouldn’t want to include it in your main claim. Just remove it. It’s not necessary and undermines what you can defend.”Thus fighting immigration and immigrants would increase rather than decrease the terrorist attacks in the United States.”2. Begin body paragraphs with subclaims, not evidence. State each point in your own words.3. Correct in-text citations throughout. Don’t refer to page numbers in the text of your essay. It is incidental information. Include it in your in-text citations only.4.