(Answered):Final Draft 25 . . . .

Question Description

This is final draft.

According to the critique in class, you can think about which part (technical analysis) need to add, which part ( repeating too much times) need to cut. The technical analysis part (By using___ technical thing, the author showing that____.) is really important. And the main idea of the essay should not just based on article, it should be a thoughtful idea and easy to find in your essay.

You can review the article to find some new idea.

Also professor gave us a interview material(111.pdf) as reference, so you can find some inspiration from that as well.

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