(Answered):Essay Revision 33 . . . .

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Revise an essay for a higher grade. Watch for comma splices. Watch for sentence fragments. Avoid vague wording/dangling modifiers. Be more careful with proofreading (this includes items like spelling or punctuation issues). Work on word choice.

Do not change what used to quote, but correct mistakes if in-text citations or works cited pages are wrong. Add quotation is OK. Make any improvements on the essay helping for a higher grades.

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Revise an essay for a higher grade. Watch for comma splices. Watch for sentence fragments. Avoid vague wording/dangling modifiers. Be more careful with proofreading (this includes