(Answered):Essay Peer Review 1 . . . .

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eClKy2_pi7m6kU…

Step 1. download the rough draft, and make as many helpful comments and suggestions on it as you can. You can use the insert comment function on word, or you can simply write your comments in red.

Step 2. Answer the following questions:

1. Does the writer have an effective introduction? is there a hook that captures the readers’ attention? Is there enough background to understand the issue at hand (even if you are not in this class)? Is there a clear thesis that asks for a change?
2. Is the organization of the essay clear? Does each body paragraph start with a
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