(Answered) : Research Synthesis Revising An Essay

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The essay is completed but the highlighted parts need to be revised and fix there are comments so if you could fix the error I also provided my Chegg at the end of the page of the essay. The book is Understand Research Synthesis.

• Revisit your third sentence.
• Revisits or rephrase your 5th sentence.
• You begin to talk about reliability and self report within the first paragraph. This takes away from your argument because it is unrelated. This also contradicts your last statement in your second highlighted paragraph. There you say its good that they used these tests because it
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