(Solved) : Its An Business Writing Assignment . . .

Question Description

Beatrice Thorne recently sent the following e-mail to Fabulous Party Rentals requesting costs and availability for a backyard event she is hosting.

Good Morning,

I am looking for a price quote for tables, linens, chairs, utensils and dishware, and trashcans for a 60-person maximum backyard event we are hosting. We are looking at December 12, 19, or 26 (no specific preference on dates) and were wondering if you could confirm your availability and provide a price list for the items we need?

Please e-mail me at thorne@yahoo.com.

Thank you.

Beatrice Thorne

Below is the first draft of the message composed by Jane Smith, Event